Reviews for Falling Apart
paper dolls chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
God, third person, please. x_X

Sorry, but I am a formatting snob, and this sort of thing...

"Hazel's POV

I'm Hazel, my life stinks. My brothers are a snob and a dork, my best friend was shot, and my parents are divorced.

Nolan's POV

I am a snobby little prick.

Candan's POV

Blah."

It makes you look rather unintelligent. Other than that, you have a pretty good idea here.
Payton chapter 2 . 6/19/2006
Yay! You updated! I want more more more more more! I decided fifty cents every chapter so you're up to a dollar!And I'll give you a dollar for the chapter Lillith comes in so you'd better get crackin!Love ya like a cousin!XOXOPayton