|Reviews for Falling Apart|
| paper dolls chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
God, third person, please. x_X
Sorry, but I am a formatting snob, and this sort of thing...
I'm Hazel, my life stinks. My brothers are a snob and a dork, my best friend was shot, and my parents are divorced.
I am a snobby little prick.
It makes you look rather unintelligent. Other than that, you have a pretty good idea here.
| Payton chapter 2 . 6/19/2006
Yay! You updated! I want more more more more more! I decided fifty cents every chapter so you're up to a dollar!And I'll give you a dollar for the chapter Lillith comes in so you'd better get crackin!Love ya like a cousin!XOXOPayton