|Reviews for laughter lines and sparkling eyes|
| Ondine's Curse chapter 2 . 3/12/2010
reminds me of mornings.
| tonight we bloom chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
paints a beautiful picture in my mind.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Great first chapter. I'm intrigued and excited to keep reading :)
| yanz chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
very striking. I love the alliteration in the first line.
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 8 . 6/1/2007
another brilliant one, really dark...I'm going to put these on my favourites.
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 5 . 6/1/2007
London..haha I know the feeling...all of these poems are amazing, even though each one is so short... (i'm jealous!) keep writing x
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
This is gorgeous (I wish I'd written it , lol) the language is beautiful and its the best short piece I've read in ages.
| wishing.on.echoes chapter 9 . 5/27/2007
I like the last one.
It reminds me of something.
I am quite fond of it all actually.
| simpleplan13 chapter 9 . 5/25/2007
I love the idea of a crashing happiness... short and wonderful
| simpleplan13 chapter 8 . 5/25/2007
Those last two lines are amazing... nice alliteration also
| dollface and her cancer chapter 4 . 5/17/2007
i like this one a lot. this boy i don't know, his eyes seem honey-colored.
| in a jar pk chapter 9 . 4/23/2007
i really enjoy the way you write.
you get so much across in so few words. x
| recycle rhymes chapter 9 . 4/14/2007
love your collection. such pretty images in such small amounts of word. perfect :)
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Striking, i loved the first line, a very different start.
| re x invented chapter 9 . 4/10/2007
I'm so glad I started coming back to this site. Nothing is more inspiring than looking into another person's soul, and there is no better mirror to the soul than poetry. And your work is striking to say the least.
I love how you can take a few simple lines and make them earth-shatteringly profound and totally juvenile all at the same time. Every line is a fragment of a thought, yet this seems to be some sort of Morrison-esque type of philosophy all by itself.
Beautiful. I can't wait to see more.
_till tonight do us part