Reviews for The Ordinary Vampire
Sparkly Shoes chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
So sweet. Very good.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
soooo cute!
frolic-horror chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
cute :)
ajashire1 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Awwwwwwww! I never really have one shots my favorites but I guess I can make an exception
semantics chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Too cute and hilarious! I think the neighbors deserve some sort of prize! Loved George and Tim. I wished they were my neighbors ;-) and Jacob is the sweetest. I can see how Ben's exes gave him such an inferiority complex, and I'm glad Jacob was there to help him pick up the pieces :-) great story! Loved it!
purecarnation chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Wow this is so sweet! I love the ending. I would love to know what happens next (maybe we'll get to meet Ben's family?) .
Krimsyn chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Very cute :)
NeelaShep chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
It's difficult writing a roller coaster of emotions like this and not make it seem rushed. But you did it, and they're adorable. Thank you!
her.eyes.forever chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
okay now listen to me lil shit cuz i'm bout to tell u something very precious

Haha, just kidding. Well I loved this and can't believe this is just a oneshot because it deserves to be a book or whatever and I love you and you're perfect and this is adorable.
allancaldera chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
It was really cute.I really like it.I am happy that Jacob is helping Ben with his trust issues and they are so cute really Ben with his shyness and insecurities and Jacob with his weird personality and for the first time I see that the werewolf is the dominant and not the vampire but really cute story.
Handsome Devil chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Always a favourite to come back to and re-read! Ahhh, it's just so cute and sweet. I almost wish it was longer but it seems like it fits as a one shot.

PS i have no idea why i haven't reviewed yet? sorry D:
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Fluffy !
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
very, incredibly adorable. I'd have loved to see a transformation, though. Kickass werewolfs
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Awwww, sweet!
Ranilyn chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I love this fic! Easily one of my favourite one-shots ever. I'm not a huge reviewer, but when you find yourself trying to google with the phrases "vampire, werewolf, neighbours, tied to porch" in a desperate attempt to find that really random story you were reading, only to forget about it after and then discover it again in several other people's know it's time to show some appreciation. _ Also, when you've reread something three times, you really ought to just add it to your favourites list.

I have to say, I love how adorable Ben is. :) And the ridiculous but well-meaning neighbours. Hahaha, and you made me laugh several times at your really unexpected and original ideas (tied to front porch, whole towns overprotective reaction to Jacob, Dad showing up with a gun!). I like your style of writing too! And I especially love this little town you've created! I suppose its too much to ask for another fic that takes place in this universe? Or a bonus chapter where one of Ben's ex visits, thinking to take advantage of him again, except this time round we've got Jacob?

Oh boy, look at me blab summarize: enjoyed this, keep writing! I recommend Aggybird's fic, Greg the Vampire. This made me think of it and is also a pretty great read.:)
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