I wish I could write fantasies... But I'll settle down with reading yours instead. Although I admit to reading it on your lj first.

And I don't think anyone can make stuff as silly as yours. All your characters are exceptionally cute. And the curly fangs? Reminded me of curly fries! (!)

You deserve more reviews for this wonderful wonderful fic. Or one-shot, whatever.

I loved Ben's angsty-ness. And to think that he's thirty! Swet... [Well, why the hell not. It was stupid to hold out hope that Jacob might find him attractive—someday in the distant future—if only he kept all his flaws hidden.] Tiggles. (Tickle-giggle)

Enough for now. I'm gonna have to get over my laziness if I'm going to review for Storyteller and Faerie Boy.

-Apple

Even more sweetness! *happy sigh* You've managed to create this little world where everything makes sense with no obvious explanation. Ben is a mini angst muffin but he is also cute. As is Jacob. I loved this story! _

Freakin' awesome story!

i don't know what i was expecting when i clicked the link for this, but oh my god...it was damn funny, and pretty cute. you rock! i think i laughed throughout the entire thing. :bows to you:

This was so, so excellent. Great Job!

Cute story. I like the world you've set it in, too.

) Mandraco.

Favouritist story EVER!

Ok. I get the mystical stuff. But in this world, everybody is homosexual?

That was a wonderful, supremely written story! The characters were fun, the old men were hilarious, and you have a great sense of humor. I'm so glad I stumbled into it. Favorites list for this story.

AWE! Dude, that was wonderful! I loved it! You're a kick butt writer, I must say. Keep up the good work.

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- Celie