Reviews for Consequences
fictitious facades chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
infectious. your poems are infectious. I am awestruck at your brilliance.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Whoa...that's deep. I feel so sorry for the girl. What would've happened if she stayed? Perhaps a better life...
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Interesting story. It keeps a reader hooked throughout the whole thing. Kudos.
bookface31 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I like this poem, and it makes you think...

asteria24 chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Nice rhythm, reminds me of a rap. The subject reminds me of that poem by Robert Frost... I think it was called "The Way"... where he went down one path and always wondered what would have happened if he had taken the other fork.
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Asinine Epiphany chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
This is really good. The summary didn't lie. It was a little more straightforward then I might like, but pretty well written and definitely a good message made. Keep it up
Hiho chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I like it. I read some of your other peoms, and I really like your style, but this was my for your review. Everyone seems to like that story.
Just-try'en-to-speak chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
wow this is so good it blew my mind, u do have a gift for writing, this is amazingly kool, what a great mataphor for leaving our worldly things for the lord. this poem really touched me.
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
I would have taken the key, but I love this it's going in my favs. Awsome job.
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Tells a wonderful story~ Great job!
Dragonscribe chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
You're wrong...i didnt like it... i adored it!

I really dont know what to say but wow, something different, and i really really really liked it.

I wouldnt know which to pick either... i love books...yet the man of your life...oh makes me think...

Wonderful job.