Reviews for Would you
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
its desperate, bitter, angst, but so beautiful and real...i really like this!
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
This piece is so beautiful, I adore this, excellent work!
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Beautiful babe. I really don't know what to say. I bet this is to F right? If not, correct me.

It just expresses the desire to have perfect love, and you know, all of us feel like this sometimes.

It's amazing though, def. going in my faves, like almost ALL the rest of the stuff you've done .

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
very creepy and powerful, beautifully done.. describes the desperation of wanting to be loved perfectly
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Woah. This is absoulty amazing. It's just do deep and beautiful. Great job.
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
I really like your wrighting style sad and deep. very talented. Good job.