Aw... that story is so sad. I always hated reading it because the son dies... how could he have been so *stupid*! lol... yea... This is really good.

D Maranwe Telrunya

"an angel" - Small musing; I always correlate the word "angel" itself with Christianity so, I was wondering what word would sound appropriate in the time peroid.

Gah! My musing has taken up the whole review-rant!

I love how airy this whole piece is; the introduction, itself, sends this feeling of flighty-ness ad its introduction to the poor, fated Icarus make me just weepy and sad and hopeful all at once, even when I *know* what will happen.

It is rotten and unfair and beautiful; who doesn't want to fly? But the price of it sounds so typical and - evil - heartbreaking.

Lovely, lovely poem.

~* Noelle

Sad...

I like how it's the myth of Icarus and yet you tell it entirely from Dadleairaljfys's point of view.