love the way the stanzas are self-contained. the way it doesn't seem to link up. the last stanza is definitely my favourite, though.

I'm not sure I totally understand this, but it's wonderful it truly is. 'I see the smile on the face of your killer' God, that's brilliant. Thank you for reviewing Brooklyn Burning! It's one of my favorite pieces and I've tinkered endlessly with it to get it right. I'm so glad you enjoyed it