Reviews for Locker Buddies
hopeless-flame chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
hm. she knows jeff intimately also? like more then acquatince? and such?
funsize chapter 5 . 9/21/2006
hahaha so cool... but hurry up and UPDATE UPSATE UPDATE!
MonkeyMohawk1 chapter 5 . 7/21/2006
ha i like ur story...interesting...u should make ur chapters longer...but still very good...UPDATE!
nadljfaithglingh chapter 5 . 6/27/2006
I felt the same way as Jeff: "that's it?" LOL. But I can understand Michelle, being a cynic myself and all. So is art going to mimic life or life art? I am intrigued. Do update again soon, yes? Yes. :)
Noelle chapter 5 . 6/27/2006
Ha! i like that story...

altho, when michelle is trying out for the part in the play, i think she should be a bit more reluctant to try out for the part. i dont know...just maybe...
hecate-dark-magic chapter 5 . 6/24/2006
brilliant! update soon
anon chapter 5 . 6/23/2006
Update soon!
poppendol chapter 5 . 6/23/2006
Nice story. I wonder, will her live imitate art? well, keep it up and update soon.
nadljfaithglingh chapter 4 . 6/22/2006
It seems like a pretty good story so far. I like your characters. Yes, a little cliched, but c'mon, what ISN'T at least slightly based on a cliche on this site? And I think you're doing a great job. Small constructive crit, but it does bug me a little when you're in 1st person ('I thought yada-yada') and then you suddenly switch to 3rd ('He was startled blah-blah') and back to 1st again. But then again, that's just the grammar freak in me :)

I hope you have fun on your trip! Update as soon as you get back!
thedarkestangelofall chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
SolisLuna chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
Hmm, cliche stories aren't always that bad, I find most highly amusing. Update soon, please!

Twinkle Star Bell chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
cute chapter. Keep writing this story is different and very interesting! Update soon!
Ms.Romantic chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
cherise chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
I think sticking to the cliche can be preferable to cliches with plot twists because the entire story would have been leading you in a direction you've become comfortable with, only for them to be yanked into another path. It can be extremely confusing rather than helpful at times. But that's just my (unnecessary) opinion.
secretshadow chapter 2 . 6/21/2006
Update soon!
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