|Reviews for June|
| AndaM chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Very nice. I did enjoy this.
(Thank you for your review of Six Years Since. Yes, it is a true poem, written for my grandmother who passed away six years ago. She was my life, my heart, and I was missing her badly last night when I wrote the poem. I tried to make the poem shorter, but it just didn't work for me. Thank you for the honest, constructive feedback. :P)
| Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
That was really really unique! I loved it! Could see, feel.. everything! Awesome! Great job! :D
| special chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
And such fun it was to read.
The essence of summer encompassed your words.
Too bad my summer is ending. :(
| ADSpencer chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Beautiful. It automatically relaxed me when I read it. NICE!
| q is for quirks chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
it was fun to read, too. it makes me smile even just to look at, and the way the words all just flow together makes for a very pleasant poem. it sounds exactly the summertime and i like how you wrote it. somehow it makes me think of a slushee for some odd reason, but slushees are good, so it works. awesome job. also, thanks for the review, and sorry it took so long to return it.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Salt spray scented kisses-ah, that is so cute.
this whole thing, makes me smileits that nice kind of springiness without overbearing tackiness
| FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
OMG! i dont even know wat to say! this is absolutely BRILL! jeez, i cant even describe how much i loved this. :D LOL. but seriously, this is awesome and was such fun to read. DEFINITELY going on my favs,
| Plinky chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Lovely - the simplicity of it works really well. Nice rhythm too.
Minimalist. That's the word I was looking for. It's lovely, really nice.
Beautiful last line. :D Keep writing!
| Autumn Dance chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
This is SO fantastic- I Love it!The whole Idea is skitzy but perfect. Just aimless fun with words in the sun! It really creates vivid images in your mind...well done!Love Autumn x x x
| Melanie Layugan chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
Wonderful, it makes my winter day!