|Reviews for sleep|
| Let It Rain chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Lots of people can relate to this, and I love the ending. Great job!
| chars chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
i like how it all ties back together. kinda slice-of-life-ish too. although it's way too short :P background, please! :))
| RedBerries chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
'It was empty. It was supposed to be empty.'
the use of 'it' is so ambiguous...I love it. The room was supposed to be empty, the wardrobe was supposed to be empty...her (I am assuming a female narrator) heart was meant to be empty? The possibilities are endless.
'I let you go, didn’t I?'
Did she? Doesn't seem like it does it...
Is this a one shot?