Reviews for The Not So Perfect Angel
ramblingrobin chapter 7 . 8/17/2017
That bathroom scene was extremely rawr! I loved it! Xoxo Robin
merrymowmow chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
shelimar chapter 16 . 6/1/2007
i swear if jason and sam don't get together soon i'm gonna suffocate. I mean don't get me wrong david is hot, but obviously jason is better. and if he is so scared to be dating a boy why not get jason to give him a handjob instead.
FrayFray chapter 16 . 2/19/2007
Very beautiful story! This last chapter was very touching and amazing. I feel sorry for David, but it seems Sam's made up his mind. I can't wait to see what happens between Sam and Jason. Good luck on your writing!

Orangeena chapter 16 . 2/11/2007
Yikes! Sam seems to be in a tight spot.. did he really think he could forget Jason? Of course not. And if it's this good with David, imagine how fucking awesome it'd be with Jason, yeah? I do hope they run into one another again soon. I love scene with the two together.

Emmy chapter 16 . 2/10/2007

GAWD! I hate him! what an incredible dick facE!
diebyownhands chapter 16 . 2/10/2007
wow welcome back!

Nice to see he made up with his friend though it still seems like she is keeping something. maybe she likes him?

then David taking him to a hotel after not talking for 3 days is a bit strange, but at least he now know for sure who he really likes.

ahh they parents are back wonder if the breakfast back bone will stick around for them too.
Vigniti Tres chapter 16 . 2/10/2007
To be honst.. I-I don't like Sam so its hard for me to enjoy the story when I don't like the guy whose perspective it's told from. I feel that his personality is cluttered, busy, all over the place, you know? The first couple of chapters I thought I understood who he was, but then he keeps changing, and not in a normal developing way. Like in the most recent chapters one minute he'll be snarky and rude and paranoid and the next he'll act like he's the victim, and the way it's written seems to convey that you feel he is as well. Is this on purpose?

I like Jason a lot though. David's okay, but he seems a little bit of a typical super protective obsessive guy, and hmm.. the ending seemed a little quick and slightly.. err, odd/creepy xDD. The whole "Let's not remind my boyfriend about our date and just leave him in a hotel room." thing, but that just might be me.

Okay, I'm done ranting. One thing that I've mentioned like.. a thousand times though:

Midnights Scream chapter 15 . 12/10/2006 that was interesting I still like Jason better but David's fine too. Poor Sam never gets a break
Vignit Tres chapter 15 . 11/5/2006
): what did David do to deserve all that yelling and glaring and kicking? All he really did was ask who Jason was and I think I understand him more than Sam, although I'm not rich at all soI guess it's hard for me to understand their viewpoints.

but lindsay was being stupid, but since she likes him i guess you can't blame her (at least i'm pretty damn positive she does) for being somewhat pissy about stuff

and again, I repeat my plea:

more Jason, PLZ PLZ PLZ.

I love him ;_;

and his sister (I forget his name) should go resbian. With lindsay. or something. so they can all be happy. or something.
Death'sBestFriend chapter 15 . 11/4/2006
wow i cant wait for the next chapter
Emmy chapter 15 . 11/4/2006
fights ... O.o ... sucks... i didnt know about ne fights .. *sigh* ... well... sammy must feel good about himself... ahh Jason. piercings... REPULSIVE! shame on u lindsay... shame...
Aiden chapter 15 . 11/3/2006
Oh, so much fun. I'm liking the general angst in this, and the characters are awesome, and generally it pleases me immensely. Keep up the excellent work, and update sooner rather than later! :)
Orangeena chapter 15 . 11/3/2006
Wow, was I cringing through that whole restaurant scene, or what? I felt awful for Sam and very confused by Lindsay. She seemed very mean and I don't know what her suspicions are. Perhaps she's just angry with how Sam has been distant from her as of late and this reaction is the culmination of that.. myabe she knows he's gay and is mad that he hasn't told her yet. I just hope she doesn't turn out homophobic :D
WitchGhost chapter 15 . 11/3/2006
a very intresting development! I hope everything works out in the end!
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