|Reviews for Immortal Pain, for a Mortal Love|
| twirling flags chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
I love how this speaks volumes in so few words. I imagined someone dying young and leaving another behind, or even passing away of old age. I thought, at first, that it was about an abusive relationship, but then I read the title and thought, "Someone died." Anyway, this is beautifully written.
Thanks for the reviews. I'm glad someone can use what I say about camp to imagine theyre at camp. Does that make sense?
Keep writing such beautiful works. I look forward to reading more...
| FromEastToWest chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
This is short and precise, pinpointing and depicting the layers of pain. Nicely done in few words! :D I particularly liked the last three lines of it. Thanks for revieweing my story, I'll be back in your zone checking your work :D