|Reviews for deafHeaven|
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
oh gasp i can't believe the allusion to shakespeare. blahh. damn lit. prettyextraordinary poem. love the "(,myangel)" & the way it seems to develop the "falling" idea you love so much. & i like the tangled confusion you have - the panic - the burst & build-up to "Godsaveyou" (which is perfectly placed, btw) & then the flat conclusion. it's beautiful, dear. i heart it & i is promising myself i shall not even think of worrying over this one.