Reviews for Notice
Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
The imagery is beautiful! I love the ribbons part.

Peace, Jess
blindinglight08 chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
this is amazing! its beautifully painful. i love it.
xTempestx chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
lovely poem. i like the repetition of lines.
hyperactivegoddess15 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
i really liked this poem! it had a lot of feeling and expression in it

just a suggestion, you could consider writing fiction for a change, not that your poems are bad :)
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
its sweet and slighy GREAT!

Liz
me chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
I like this one a lot.
method acting chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
I liked the summary, and I think you should have stuck with that mindset rather than go 'cup of poison' on me. I really like the ribbon bit though. File it under angst, but it's nicely written. Good job.
Love-and- Lust chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
i like this alot, and thatks for the review
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
This has a very lyrical song-like quality that really enhances the flow. Well done.