I want know what happens next! You got me hooked and now since you don't seem to be updating anymore I won't ever get to see how it ends!

Please come back and finish this. :(

This is the sweetest vampire story I've read in a long while.
Thanks for keeping this up!

I love this story but hate that youve seemed to stop...

Glad that you finally updated plz keep this going on :)

An absolutely amazing store! Please finish it. I love the plot line. Your characters are beautiful. I really really love this story. Update? Please i beg of you.

I did enjoy this story although I wish I would have paid attention to the fact you haven't finished :)
I liked the dialogue and really liked the alternate p. . they were written pretty well and smooth.
Wish I knew what happened. I don't recall there being a young description of sergie either, only when he was the creepy sickly man. I did favor casper though.

I have enjoyed this stroy a lot though I rather hoped she would couple with the detective

Great Story! Can't wait till next update. :) :)

Even though it seems you've quit writing on here I just wanted to say I finished reading this story and it's fantastic! I wish I knew what you had planned for the characters at the end.

Hello from the RG!

[Finally, long after Rita'd slouched up against the wall asleep, Celia did stop; reduced to the dry heaves.] Grammar- the semicolon should be a comma because the clause after it is not independent.

I liked your dialogue, because I thought the way you wrote it seemed very natural.

~Merle

I commend your efforts here and I really think you've got a decent story line, but I'm not sure whether I liked this beginning or not. The characters just didn't really ring true to me. It may be because of the way you introduced them. It just sounded a bit...I don't know...cliche. Also, I don't think it's necessary to give us info dump about their personalities and backgrounds. If the characters are fleshed out and the dialogue is written well the readers will see that Lucy is a party girl and the rebellious type. We'll find out through Celia's dialogue that she's has a witty sense of humor. No need explain everything or be so obvious. Well that my two cent critique. Take it with a grain of salt. Writing is learning process for us all, so keep writing and growing. Best of luck!

Aww. It's been so long that you probably wouldn't be able to finish the way you planned. Maybe you don't even remember where you were going with the story? :(

Anyway, if you find any spare time in your life, and can remember the feelings that helped you with this story, we would absolutely LOVE to read more of this!

hello!

well that was extremely interesting and i really like the story so far, so cant wait till the next update.

bye

i love that last line!

you are a genius

if i could bake and send it to you

you would be getting a huge ass cake right about now

Wow, I absolutly love your story and can't wait until you write more chapters!