Welcome back, Ollie May. And what a return that was! I look forward to reading more in the furture..

I have to admit, I just about died from shock when this notification came in. But I'm so glad it did. You're an awesome writer, and this story is so interesting. I can only hope it won't be another 2 years before the next chapter, but if it is, this story is worth the wait!

Well! I suppose I could squeal and shriek and be generally delighted, but I've just woken up. What a fabulous start to the day.

I could also say I miss you. But I think a clearer expression of that would be to tell you that, even years later, you still need someone to proof these things to catch the little spelling/grammar/syntax errors. ;)

Cheers,

Olga

oh hot damn :D! Update!

Oh, finally! I thought you'd given up on this story! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

yayayayayayayay! you updated! lol it was awesome by the way, no faults that i could tell.

hi

PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SON.

or i might just die.

this is so good , i spent two hours reading the whole thing.

so please update, and not wait until two years later.

or ill be so sad.

PLEASE.

great to read an update from you again! that feels fabtastic. Im still waiting for the sex scen to occur! woho!

HORAYY for an update! :D

loved it! me wants more! .

please update son!

I squealed like crazy when I saw this new chapter!

I'm so glad you're still continuing this story! With a lot of fp stories that don't update in a while, I usually have to go back and re-read the whole thing. But with this, I didn't have to because this story is so memorable.

I amazed that even after 2 yrs, the story and characters still have the same feel. It's so fantastic and really shows how great of a writer you really are :)

I really love Antony and Lana! They have a great friendship and WHEN they take it further than being just besties, they'll be a great couple :)

I am so happy that you updated again, I didn't remember all of the story right away so I'm gonna go back and reread everything. I hope that you continue updating and don't get writers block until you start your next story :) THANK YOU!

I loved this particular chapter, what with the action and all that. Thing is I don't really remember the plot now, so I guess I'm just going to reread your story :)

Anyway, please update...

Dude, totally not cool to leave us hanging for TWO YEARS...on the other hand, at least you posted. Better late then never, I guess :)

But now that you've got my hopes up for continuing, I will seriously cry if you stop again :(

x

oh my gosh

cannot believe that you updated! HOORAY! I have a quiz tomorrow that I should be studying for but that probably won't stop me from re-reading this WHOLE story because that last chapter was awesome. Poor Emo :( Please please please update soon! Can't wait for the next instalment!

What? NO ! YOU MUST FINISH THIS STORY OR I WILL CRY !

ITS SO AWESOME ! :) Loving it. It's not typical, it has its cliches, the guys are severely hot hot hot/awesome awesome awesome! -drool-, and the story is severely captivating (not cute ;) ) LOL okay well I think the story is cute but or reference sakes.

i like this story so very much I'm not studying for my yearly exams which I am severely stressing over. Which I really should get to now , but im so sleepy. o_O"

I will though, but that's besides the point. You really gotta update update!

I like this story! i love her sarcasm LOL. Sarcastic people ftw!