This is seriously a great story .If you don't update very soon, I might feel inclined to sing the deutsch songs about 'Sinterklaas' and rip your throat off (quite painful, or so people told me - especialy the deutsch songs part).

Mwahahaha. I am evil.

By the way, do you think you could actually include a romanian guy with blue hair in your story? It'd be original and I'd be extremelly happy.

Making a weird french girl living in Bangkok (aka me) happy is a once in a lifetime opportunity, so think about it.

Plus, if you need anything in deutsch, french or thai, I can help. I can even help a little with romanian.

You are a nice person, aren't you? Don't you like me?

Please update and add some romanian guy and you shall have my eternal gratitude.

Bref. I have to stop making weird comments.

This here is absolutely amazing - you know that, right? I mean, I read this in one go! :) That's how much I loved it.

To tell you the truth I'd seen this story many times before, but never bothered to read it. I dunno, I was just pu off by the mafioso thing in the summary.

But was I wrong! I'm madly in love with the Romano twins and I even like the Russian dude. Not to mention I actually do like your main character ('cause I usually get really bored by them), she's funny and aproachable.

So here's where I ask - and beg - for another few chapters just to please this poor old soul. Think of it as a Christmas gift! ;)

I'll stop now - this review's way too long.

Congrats for the brilliant work!

P.s.: Do we ever get to see the kiss?

I love this story!

Ah man, I think I just found my favorite story on Fiction Press. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon, please.

wow. This story is brillant! There are very few stories that I truly enjoy reading that aren't cliches. I love your characters. Everyone has so much chemistry! I can't wait to find out how Anthony finds out about Emo!

Update when you can! Hope you're still inspired!

I hate knowing that Emo's bad but I definitely can't wait for Antony to finally acknowledge his love and lust for her :)

-Katherine

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ohmygoshh...why did it stop :( i so can't wait for the next chapter!

i feel like a fan girl/groupie :

but i am seriously loving this story :P

I seriously need this story to come full circle! Its killing me! Amazing writing, I must say I hope it gets published so I can own a copy. I hope you become inspired soon and post another chapter I feel like we're running the last few legs now and I definitely can't wait to find out the thought behind the kiss.

I just read this story and it's fantastic. I know it's been a while since you posted it, but I'd really love to read more. Please update soon!

Aww, Emo is so cute! But what happened to him? Why is he not alive anymore? I love his name too. Emo. Reminds me of Elmo!

I miss Antony too.

"And if I felt a couple tears on my neck, he knew I wouldn’t breathe a word."

The TV was on in the background when I was reading this and it was playing a really sad instrumental song and I had a few tears in my eyes too! Poor Markus!

Brilliant story though. Lana's so unbelievably cool, I wish I could think of her witty comebacks!

Can't wait to read more!

update soon please!

Did I mention that I check it quite often?

Ohh please update! It might seem a tad obsessive but I keep waiting to see that email saying this story has been updated pretty much every time I check my email. Please please please post something! Even a few sentences would suffice :)

Yet another slightly sad but mostly hopeful reader here -

Just finished reading this in one go, and it's really very good. I mean, it's so engaging, funny, well-paced, and incredibly unfinished that it hurts. It's refreshing to have a story of this caliber on here, and I'm so glad you've invested so much in it [and us, your happy readers] already. Needless to say, I've joined the ranks of the waiting here.

I hope things are going well in your world. I [we all] hope you're still writing - you've got a lot to offer that would be a shame to lose, especially when it comes to this community and this story. Looking forward to your next update! :)