YOU'RE ALIVE!

*and the heaven sings in raputurous joy*

I need more.

Ahck.

Okay. So I don't have anything constructive or even meaningful to say about this story. But there is way too little reviews for something this good :] So I thought I'd throw in my two cents worth. Please update soon! i'm dying to know about what happened to Emo.

What a twist. I had forgotten that it was a flashback until you reminded me. I never thought that sexy character in this chapter was Anthony. What a great surprise. I will definitely have to read more of your work later.

Great. I liked how you developed Lana Montgomery's character. She seems witty and slightly sarcastic. I do believe that she is telling the truth. I am not sure what to make of the Mr. Mafioso guy yet or of Anthony. I'm trying to figure out why he had meant to kiss Lana right in front of the Mafioso, if I am interpreting this story correctly.

Interesting. I didn't think that males and females could have shared a room in college, but my misconception was from the fact that I attend a private college where it is almost illegal to have a roommate of the opposite sex. I like the opening of the story. Very good job.

I can not beleive I have never clicked on the link to your story until just recently. It is really good and I would love to continue reading it. Hope you get the inspiration/time/motivation to finish it!

best of luck

katie

So, I am not actually reviewing the prologue, but the story in general, as it will not let me review the last chapter again.

And, looking back over the prologue, it is actually quite good in and of itself...rather short, but definitely attention-grabbing.

So, I really like your whole idea here. It seems like it would be a little unrealistic, but you make it sound plausible. And I'm very curious to see what will happen - and why Antony kissed her in the first place. (She can't just not explain it to them, because then we won't get to hear about it!). It seems like they really have chemistry.

I'm sure you've heard all of this before (this story has over 700 reviews!), but I still felt compelled to mention it. And I hope that your new chapters will be up soon. Please don't take that as me begging you to write, though. I know you have your own life and whatnot...

So, I'm going to stop rambling now. I'm usually not this bad. Really.

Great story. Keep up the good work. :)

I recently stumbled across this story and I have to admit I enjoying it. I love the playful banter between the characters, the character development, and the fact there are hot sexy men in this story. That's always a bonus. Hopefully you're next update will be soon, I can't wait to see where this story is going.

NO there's no more chapters! I really, really hope you update soon-ish...because I need to know what's going to happen next.

I love Annie. She's so adorable. Especially at the end when she said, "Boys are silly." SO TRUE...

"...and involve you losing the ability to bear children."

Well, I'm not sure how much weight this threat holds since men don't exactly bear children...

Emo seems so nice and funny and hot, though. WHY DOES HE HAVE TO DIE?

(Sorry. I just finished reading this book where all of my favorite characters died, so I'm not sure how much more death I can take today. ;))

If I was running, and happened to see Antony running - let's say on the opposite side of the street - and he was shirtless...I might fall over. Or have a heart attack. Or both.

That was deep. ;)

Alexa seems a lot smarter than people (myself included) give her credit for. And I liked the phone conversation, too )