OH MY GOODNESS /3 WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED!? T_T

Oh dang it I was really looking forward to how this was going to end. You built up so much suspense I just have to know. I really hope you're not going to give up on this story because I really want to know how they sort out this mess. Update soon. Please. :)

Great writing, exciting story. I love the way you are pacing it with the flashbacks (or flashfowards?).
I just wanted to point something out that seemed a little odd. I think it is highly unrealistic to have the boys go to their mother first with something like the drug thing. A normal teenage boy living at home with his parents who has a normal relationship with both of them would automatically go to the father first or not tell anybody. Anyway, just my cc, don't take this as insulting your writing skills because you are awesome.

It is 3 in the morning. I didn't realize this story wasn't finished until I was almost done with it, and I'm sure you don't even look at this site anymore let alone check the reviews on a story you stopped writing 3 years ago, but dude, WHY? You're an awesome writer and the chemistry between the characters in this story is phenomenal; so much so that you could honestly give a brief synopsis of what happens next and we could all imagine it on our own. But you shouldn't do that. Because a story like this deserves an ending. And I have a tension headache from reading this story for the last few hours only to find out that it ended on a whopper of a cliffhanger.

I never review story but I just had to for this one. Please please please finish writing it. I'm absolutely in love with this story I was in shock when I realized it wasn't complete. I hope you haves a massive burst of inspiration but please finish this story. PLEASE

This story is amazing! But as if you didn't know already. The easy banter and relationships you've formed between the characters are so believable and hilarious. I love your story but am so sad that it's been a while. And left at such a cliffhanger nonetheless! But aside from that, great job! I can't wait to read more if there's ever more :)

oh man, the pace of this story is amazing. the chemistry of their conversations is insatiable! it's such a shame there's been no updates for ages. i am totally digging this story! hopefully, you are struck by some sort of inspiration and decide to update :) either way, epic as story!

I don't review stories which is bad, I know , but I had to for this one. How could this not be finished? It is so good. So good. Please at least tell me what happened at least!

I'm torn between hating you for ending it here and loving you for writing it. Seriously, this is one of the most entertaining stories I've read on this site. It's been super funny right from the beginning but then it also started to have this more serious edge, with Markus and Antony's family history...

I'm particularly fond of the dialogue, the easy banter between the characters and just the way they behave towards each other (especially Antony and Lana. And Markus' comments).

You have to update, though. Like right now. The suspense's been killing me right from the start as to how exactly she was kidnapped and why Antony kissed her (I wanted to get to that part, dammit) and now Emory and stuff... And Lana's still with Mob Guy, so you have to update right now. I mean, please. It was great thinking on your part starting off with that (her being kidnapped because he kissed her) and then tell us the story kinda backwards, with them being best platonic friends forever and Lana not knowing he was a spy. It forces the readers to keep reading, which I guess in a way makes you evil.

I knOW I'm a little late to the game but please, i'm dying to know what happens next! i just also wanted to say I love the relationships you've created, the characters too. you've done a great job- I really cared when Markus and Jade broke up. I hope you update sometime within the year, or two, but I understand. Till next time- which I can't wait for!

please finish this story! I just stumbled across it and I'm utterly and irrevocably in love with it.

pls finish the story? :)

Please, please, please, please, please, please update this amazing story. You're characters are just so well written an feel real. I love the scenes with the Mob Guy. Your writing is entrancing. I want to read the end of this fantastic story. Please.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I just marathoned this fic you can't leave it there! *screams and bangs head on desk*
What happens next? Update Update Update! hgfe;ouiyrqw0gygtfvbsfkuhfwihewuh jdjkjufgtvresfoisfhiojh!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Okay calmer... I'ma cry If you don't update!

I've just been up till 3am in the morning reading your entire story only to find it hasnt been updated since 2010. This upsets me greatly, I want to know the end. GET BACK ON IT. Love you lots. A Fan