amazing fic! btw i pick markus' side. oh and plz update soon )

WOW! Love the story and I'm so glad I found it. I can't wait to find out about this Emo kid and what happens with him. I so hope Lana didn't tell him about Markus and Antony that would just suck to the utmost on her part! anyway, update soon! I cannot wait to read more!

I'm trying to come up with various possible theories for Emo. I seriously wonder why he got killed and what is with his apparent evilness.

And I'm guessing it was a mistake on her part to tell Emo about the breakup? I wonder why, I really do! Argh the suspense, the mystery! D

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you finally updated!:). so happy. please update with more soon

UPDATE SOON! I'm getting obsessed with this story!

Ah cute, I am so going to watch how this comes along

my first thought was, say WORD she updated! fantastic that you did, even though i totally forgot half of what happened in the story. but it's all coming back now, yo. 8) thanks for not forgetting this fabulous story.

Yay! I can't believe you're back!

I so enjoyed reading this chapter and getting caught up in the story again. Update update update. Loved it!

lovely wonderful spectavular

update soon!

is it me or did the chapters get shorter with each update.

Amazing. Exciting. I love the detail - you really have some talent here :)

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I love that you keep making fun of the guy raising his eyebrows, because I've read so many things in which the characters do all sorts of odd things with them. (Draw them together, knit them, furrow them, etc.) My friends and I have always made fun of that, weird as it sounds.

"it’s face" its face

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"The brother gave his brother a long look before turning his eyes to me." - I'm not fond of the phrasing here, because all of the "brother" business is confusing.

I liked that you're making us feel sorry for Antony ("I'd hate me too"), because now I sort of have to like him, because it looks like there's hope.

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I absolutely loved this chapter, because it was so awkward. Wow. I think this one is my favorite so far.

I also like Antony, even though he seems like a jerk so far, because he's also funny. And because even though he's fictional, he sounds way hot. ;)

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I love reading Lara's narration, because it's freaking hilarious. And as if this situation wasn't ridiculous enough, the way she's telling us about it makes it sound even more ridiculous.

I loved this line, "It would take at least two more kisses and he’d have to be shirtless," because it made me laugh out loud. For a long time, I can assure you.