Reviews for It Can Always Get Worse |
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Demi Dear chapter 24 . 9/4/2007 You haven't given up on this story, have you? Because it's really, REALLY good! I love the whole idea of this, the way she's telling the story to the mafioso. Very clever! :) My only niggle are the few spelling mistakes, but I can live with it ;) PLEASE update soon! |
whats-with-humans chapter 24 . 9/4/2007 I absolutely love this story. I haven't had much time to read, so it's kept me busy for a while and given me something to look forward to after a busy day. Your characters are so vivid. And i love the concept of the heroic main guy who's actually willing to let the girl he's in love with attempt to have the normal life he knows she couldn't have with him. As if he's content just to have her near him. it's so touching and unique. Your writing style is so thoroughly entertaining, i really don't know how you do it. And i LOVE the layout of the story, the back-and-forth between her story and the reality with the Russian mob boss. Brilliant. It's so original! I can't wait to read more. |
Demeterr chapter 24 . 9/1/2007 Wow this is good and creative. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Bo0b chapter 24 . 8/29/2007 I love this story, its fantastic! But it's been so long since you updated... |
Lynds chapter 24 . 8/27/2007 you should definitley complete this story! i think it is the most amazing story ever! and it definitely deserves all those exclaimation points! I really really really would like to know how this ends because the way it's written i feel like i'm literally watching it all. The relationships you have going on between markus and antony and lana are amazing and the way they bond is superb! i absolutely LOVE this story and i think you should continue it. Please? Lynds |
WMystic chapter 1 . 8/27/2007 Hehe! I like the main girl already! I like her attitude, haha. I'll read more later! Good job! |
FM Radio chapter 24 . 8/24/2007 YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN HOW LOING? EVIL PERSON! UPDATE OR I WILL...I don't know what I'll do...plus I don't know you...hm. WELL IT WILL BE VERY BAD! *giggles* |
fnnyjnny1414 chapter 24 . 8/24/2007 wow i've been waiting for this chappie since forver ago ... you sure those two weeks werent two and something months? Other than that nice chappie... |
Chameleonduality chapter 24 . 8/24/2007 Ohmigod. Update, update, UPDATE woman! I love it! Lana is magnificent, Markus and Anthony are equally wonderful. And while not only being brilliant, your characters also have FLAWS, thereby investing in them that little spark of humanity that I adore. Argh. *frustrated at there being no more chapters for her to peruse* It's too damn good... you have good writing skills. Peace. . |
zoule chapter 24 . 8/20/2007 The original way you formatted this story is great. She's telling it while she's kidnapped! Update soon ;) |
run-around-perfect chapter 24 . 8/20/2007 I just found this story (ironically, only a few days after I took the MCAT:) and I had to sit and read it all at once. It's a fun story. Lana is hilarious! Update soon! |
starlit x sky chapter 24 . 8/16/2007 This is such a great story. I'm really hoping you can update soon! It's a really good plot, and it's really well written too. You have talent! |
BB chapter 24 . 8/11/2007 Aw... I've been waiting AGES for you to update... "sniff* ... I cant't help but think that you don't love your reviewers anymore... :( |
Genato chapter 24 . 8/7/2007 this is good. way good. REALLY REALLY WAY GOOD. okay, i know, i know.. you've heard this a lot already but i'm gonna try to make a review that your fic deserves... *cue for start babbling* when i first saw this fic.. i clicked the link and was not really expecting a great great fic. but there it was, a great great fic. the characters are all cool, and fun. they have their flaws, they're not perfect which makes them more perfect-er, if you get what i mean. also, even if the event is not really important-important.. you wrote it quite good and not dragging.. which authors nowadays find hard to do. there's not much grammatical errors so it doesn't annoy the one reading it too, another plus. also, even if the plot is a bit cliche.. you write it good so that it's very okay for it to be cliche.. IT'S MORE than good.. *cue to stop babbling.* please update and i hope somehow... i motivated you to UPDATE from this very very long babbling.. haha. |
fermina chapter 24 . 7/22/2007 It must be a nostalgic day because I remember reading this last year and by chance, I came across the story again. And I realized that I never reviewed, but better late than never right? There is an irrestible charm to your story. It's fast-paced, it's entertaining, it's emotionally-engaging. You've created dynamic characters, an equally dynamic plot and your execution is brilliant. The secondary cast is well-supported and I'm just as intrigued by their story as I am by Lana's. Though I am sure the basic plot has been done before, this is by far the most original and careful take on it I've seen. The humour is wonderful and you have a good sense of pacing/timing. The storytelling technique unfolds seamlessly and you've accomplished in this way that doesn't confuse the reader but also engages them much more. This story was one of those that enthralls you chapter after chapter without stopping, and that's a touch not many writers have. There's not much to say except that knowing just how many loose ends there are to tie up, I hope to see an update soon. |