freaking A sister, brilliant story. the chapters flow nicely...

Annie is so adorable! :D

yeah... dogs are like that. silly.

I hope the next chapter comes out soon!

Thank you for updating! I love Antony. It's late at night, and my ability to create in-depth conclusions about this chapter, or this story in general, is lacking. So I'll leave you with a huge thank you and with the assurance that I'll still be keeping my eye on this story.

Great chapter. I really like Markus as a character. The fact that he and Lana have developed a friendship is wonderful. Looking forward to another update!

Heh. I'm really enjoying this story. Antony is amazing, I love how he wants to protect her. It's cute. As for Marcus, I hate when guys forget how strong they are. It bothers me. They should remember that they can hurt people smaller than then.

But I guess writing wouldn't be as much fun if no one ever got hurt, even if it is only be accident.

Thanks for updating, hope another one comes soon. :)

-Ashley

Yay! an update! I loved their phone conversation. Very cute! :)

Update soon!

summers-end

i really liked this chapter...not sure why though..lol, i like all your chapters!

i love how you write this story, all from Lana's POV but as if she's telling a story. Very nicely done. I really enjoyed this chapter (the entire story too!) and will be looking forward to the next one!

I found this story and it is really great! The plot is really original. I haven't seen anything like it on here. I like how Lana is the one telling the story and it is so crystall clear that Lana and Antony are in love. UPDATE SOON!

i love this story! its so original and i love all your characters, but how could jade? i was like she cheated on markus! i love markus but not as much as antony. and i love how you placed the story so that lana is telling the story to the guy who kidnapped her. :D, well you said you were going to update on saturday after updating this last chapter but its been awhile, but i hope you update this soon please!

wait, wut happened to the rest of the story? it was good, come on! you have to keep on updating.

Much love for your story! I know I'm a little Johnny-come-lately, but it's a fantabulous story anyway. Thanks!

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