Reviews for It Can Always Get Worse
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 22 . 2/22/2007
I WANT CHAPTER! please? you said sunday. it has been like 5 sundays. time to give a chapter and some romance perhaps? okay..you just got yourself another reader...now update!
toazdo chapter 22 . 2/22/2007
omg..i ABSOLUTELY LOVE your story..i like how you're writing it as if she's retelling it to that badass mob guy instead of how everyone normally writes theirs..i love lana..she's quite unique and anthony sounds very hot..lol keep up the great work and hope you update soon..PLEASE!
lool chapter 22 . 2/11/2007
this is a pretty creative plot, like i said before, very sheharaze, arabian nights because of the story telling int he beginning, i just hope that lana gets out safe and we can find out more about this relationship/kiss between lana and antony.
lool chapter 15 . 2/10/2007
cool.

very sheharazade-ish
britty-tt chapter 22 . 2/10/2007
When I read the summary to your story I thought it would be one of those 'fall in love with your captor' cliches, but it wasnt. I like how your story is set out. She is telling her captor her story. I think that part of the story is very original.

I love your story. It's defiantly original enough for me, doesn't have any bad grammar, spelling errors or other little things that get on my nerves (the grammar ecspecially). Over all its very well written.

Your characters are very well devolped. I love Antony's character. nd Marcus's, and most of all Lanas. Lol I love all of your characters.

Im adding you to my favourites list. Though I have like 85 fave stories on there, recently I've been move nd move relucant to add stories to it...cause I see nothing new. But I really like this story!
J. Marit chapter 22 . 1/29/2007
I finished reading this but havent gotten the chance to review yet.

I'm seriously falling in love with your stories. The plots are just amazing. You made something that is usually written so unrealistically and made it real. And i really like the pace of the story. All in all, it's amazing, but you probably know that :)

Can't wait to read more..

Kellie
RosaBree chapter 8 . 1/25/2007
Hey, I really like your story. It's catchy. I haven't read it all yet but i'm really into it. Keep up the good work and thanks for the review. I've updated mre as well. Just in case you were wondering.
MB chapter 22 . 1/22/2007
Loved it. :)
aDELYN chapter 22 . 1/21/2007
iF THE CHAPTERS ARE ALREADY DONE, THEN UPDATE!

HOW LONG WILL THIS STORY BE?

UPDATE SOON!

!
Crewger chapter 22 . 1/19/2007
ever heard of Medias res? it's found in the odessey, you start the story near the end and flashback to the beginning. just thought that you might be interested. good story
Alenor chapter 22 . 1/18/2007
heya, this is a great chappie. i'm glad you stuck with the original title. can't wait for more. but poor markus, he's gonna be upset about breaking up with jade but at least she's trying to do the right thing by breaking up with him before she physically cheats on him, that would be so much worse. cya next time ~ Alenor.
Naitael chapter 3 . 1/17/2007
This is probably my favorite chapter. I guess the whole reference to cavewomen was what won me over, lol.

Yeah, I have no idea how to write "well rounded critiques", like this thing is suggesting I do...
Angel of Ink chapter 22 . 1/17/2007
I seriously worship you.

You need to update this...

and then update it again...

and again...

until it's done.

It's that good.

Oh, and I love love love Antony. Nice name, nice character. He couldn't be more perfect if he had black hair. And that's saying something.
duhniece chapter 22 . 1/16/2007
so i absolutely love this and i just thought you'd like to know that youre very talented.
cherrypiesizzle chapter 22 . 1/16/2007
LOL well i love it..xP please update soon~!
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