hey... i love your story. it's interesting how you didn't start your fic with the actual beginning of the story. i finished all 19 chaps at one go-means i couldn't stop myself. so kudos to you! :)

haha.. anyway, i'm enoying the story so far. but i can't help but question why the story is under the romance category if, so far, there hasn't been any romantic relationships?

besides that.. all i have to say is good job! haha.. your story is now on my fac list! hope to see your next chap soon!

Hey! So... There are a few questions, but I don't really think you'll answer them, b/c I probably wouldn't. Just saw the pics and Emo looks great. Now, why is he dead? Does Mob Guy think Antony killed him? Was Emo some sort of threat? Why doesn't Lana wants to talk about it? Did Antony kill Emo? Ok, I'll stop asking now.

Hope the next update won't take long. )

Hmm, I don't recall ever hearing about Emo before in the story. Is this the first time he's mentioned? Well, I knew there had to be something that took place within those next two years... That's a lot of time, and it couldn't have been THAT boring.

~Bob Evans

O, a new character and twist. Nice. I was hoping the chapter would be longer, but, hey, it still works. Nothing to advise/reveiw/whatever you want to call it.

oh emo! hehe update soon please!

Short chapter, but very much appreciated anyways. Emo's dead? O_O I can't wait to find out if they hooked up and if so, how Antony reacted and what lead up to the kiss...

LOL HAHA HILLARIOUS! Emo! :D

Great chapter. I loved it. Post More Soon.

Wow. Intense..

I like it so far. I've been reading it for quite some time now, but never really got around to reviewing. I thought this chapter was suitable for that.

I like how you can make something that may otherwise before very dramatic and perhaps depressing and add some humor to it. The "climax" of the fight between Lana and Antony (I TOTALLY forgot his name for two seconds..) could have gone horribly. But I enjoy how you dealt with it.

I LOVE the sexual tension between the two of them too. I'm always wondering when that infamous kiss is gonna pop up.

I like it. Keep up the wonderful work!

(does happy dance) Woot! UPDATE!

Heh, I know. Took me long enough to review...lol

Well, keep up the top-notch work!

-Sa x33

*waves* New fan here! I LOVE this fic. OMG, I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope to see it soon. :)

lol, yeah well thats my job. since I can't...fine, won't get my lazy bum up and run my fingers to the bone typing up stories, I encourage those authors that can. Well they have to be good or else I might want to flame the author and that just isn't right. ...I will admit another reason I'm not writing a story is b/c I don't understand COMMA PLACEMENT, which will probably screw me over a number of times when I start whipping out those college essays...sorry got a little distracted. haha, yep I do know a good amount from those grand films, erm I mean historical uh...lol, nvm my brain does not want to cooperate. I'm actually going to go see that new 007 historical thing so I can freshen up on my knowledge.

Ok, Wow, this story is amazing, as is 'Make that Two'.

I love your characters, especially the verbal sparring between Antony and Lana, and I sure as hell wouldn't mind Antony tied to my bedposts ]

I honestly have no criticism whatsoever and nothing to say other than keep up the amazing work and I hope you update soon.

Hey! My birthday's on Halloween, too! _ Happy belated birthday! Can't wait to see what happens next...

THe format of your story is so different from others. Can't wait for the next update!