That must be the most horrible way to meet your partner in crime. Of course, I would have kicked HIM to wake him up. Or just for good measure. Then we'd learn whether or not he cusses with any skill at all. Believe me, that information is quite valuable when you want to expand your vocabulary.

Absolutely peachy. Though I wouldn't make sweeping generalizations if I were you. Just a thought, considering a girl named Olga may just get offended. Especially if she's fluent in Russian. ~_

Of course, if said theoretical female enjoys the story, common sense dictates that she is either not easily offened or has no love for anything Russian.

A very very good beginning. I know there is more to read and I felt like letting you in on the secret that I have discovered time for reading.

Amazing, hunh? It falls in between typing and napping.

I love how this story is being told. I mean...that we go BACK to read the story, and I like the mafioso's interjections. I like how she's telling it to her captor, I mean. And man, but Romano (is that his name? I forget) sounds really, really smexy. And that hurt me a bit (in a good way) when Boy Toy said "I'd hate me too." Wah. Way cool, though...it's a good line. Perfectly understated but a bit poignant, too. I dunno. I'm rambling and I probably sound really obnoxious/pretentious right now, but whatev. Anyway, please udpate soon!

Aw. Boy Toy hates himself? How sad. I love your girl's sense of humor, it's so wicked.

Okay this story is amazing. I love how different it is than anything I've ever read. Mob boss dude is really interesting. He's starting to grow on me.

I really can't imagine her buying a skirt because it gave her a booty. Or working in a bar. It's really funny though.

I wanna know how Antony got that scar. It sounds just as sexy as she said it was. But there is no way I could have kept my cool if I found some sexy guy in my bed. I would have started trying to beat him to death or something. Or ravish him. Or both.

Thou shalt write until thine story is completed. Because it kicks ass.

Another great chapter! Can't wait to find out how they became roomies.

I really liked the chapter!

Write more soon, please!

Fantastico!

Write more soon please!

Haha, that was pretty funny. I liked the whole mafia/kidnapping thing. Can't wait to see where you're going with this!

I so love this! I am SO reading this!

It seems clever and funny so far, and while the whole kidnapping thing could have turned out to be boring and cliched, you did a good job of starting it off realistically.

Please keep going! :)

Thus far - incredibly amusing, short and sweet. I need for you to update this sometime in the near future. Seriously. I wanna know just what's up with said Mafia and whatnot, m'kay?