Please update soon!

SO GOOD :)

keep it up!

this story is soo amazing, i love it. I sincereley hope you update more frequentley and finish this story. :)

Aw man, this such a greakin' awesome idea. There's too much to compliment and I'm dying to get to the next chapter. : D

This was an unbelievable chapter! I hope that you haven't given up on the story, though. You haven't updated since August. I hope you're just taking a break! :D

2 years. but, i will still read it, please please please update soon, its too good a story to let go! i dunno what i have to say to get you to continue,but tell me, and i will say it :D

aw...please update. it was just getting to the good part and then...

OMG

this is great. Fantatic plot, beautiful dialogue & description. and your charcterizatoion outstandind.

okay, i LOVE your story. and i PLEASE encourage you to keep writing! It's extremely engaging, that i read it all in one day. when i found out that it was not completed yet...i hoped it would be soon updated! it's been like four months...i hope you haven't given up or anything!

happy writing,

Bookwyrm ;)

Man, what a place to leave off! I'd love to know what happens next. I'm hooked. And telling the story though her narration to Mob Guy... clever device.

Yet what I really want to know how is they got to the part where she kisses Antony after 3 years!

Dude, you can't leave it now!

I love getting this far in a story- the writing flows so much nicer and sentences are loaded with promise. I'm curious to why Anthony killed Emo though- and why Emo was so willing to turn on his sex protege.

I hope you update soon.

I love the characters. Markus, Anthony, Annie and the main gal in particular. You go, sister!

Thanks for updating! Every once in a while I'd check and finally there was a new chapter. Can't wait for more!

I am so excited that you updated! I just reread the story again and it was beyond awesome that you wrote another chapter! This was one of the first stories I read on fictionpress and I'm excited that it's being continued!

Thanks so much for updating! Good job on the chapter too. And I'm so nervous to see why that happened to Emo; I really did like him. :(

Can't wait to read the next chapter. :P

first time reading this and loved it until the latest chapter!

update soon!

wonder if theres any romance between antony and lana

cheer _

Hi there!

I found this in the fave's tab of one of the authors I was reading and decided to check it out! I'm pretty intrigued up until now :)

I like giving meat-y reviews... I try to be a little critical when I read things so that my reviews are helpful. So, just as a quick note: your chapters seem to be well written/edited because there are very few erros, there's just a few extra words here and there. In the future, if I see any, I can point out to you which sentences they're in. :) Otherwise, up until now I haven't found anything with the plot that I could comment on. The one thing is that I'm a little surprised Lana would be telling all this to someone who is so very clearly a bad guy... obvisouly she has no training or anything so it would be completely ridiculous to expect her to keep secrets under torture but it's also a little weird that she's willing to spill all of Antony's secrets so easily... my one suggestion would be maybe to have one of Mob Guys torture her first? Nothing too bad but maybe at least beat her a little after she refuses to talk? Or threaten her family? I don't know...

I have to say... I have a soft spot for spy stories so I'm very excited I found this! I actually know a few guys that are intelligence unit so I can definitely agree... spies are total babes ;). It seems that you took a big hiatus so I'm hoping your next chapter will be uploaded sooner than that!

See you in the next chapter,

Dani

When I really, really, really like a story, I don't know what to say except 'thank you' so I'll leave it at that. :)