|Reviews for In Vain|
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
i feel stupid for what i wrote for onlooker, i was too stupid to know that the one i said i liked the most was the last... but yeah, that one rocked. : )
-alright, about this poem... i like the forth line. & i like the ending, it leaves a bitter feeling to the poem.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
"For all the presumably surpassed/Ladder rungs/And conquered fears" beautiful
like how the beginning seems peaceful, but as the poem (time) went on, things began to unravel