Reviews for Dear Love
Asmodai-Superbia chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
I liked it, you did very well getting the feeling across. I liked how it mentioned some of the writers fears about the faithfulness of their lover. The line "Or will we last for much more long?" just doesn't sound right, It's rather akward phrasing. Maybe try another rhyme? Just my opinion though. Good work on whole though! ~ASHe