Reviews for But You Don't
msdewey chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
It's so nice when they don't listen until you make the right request. This is really good - the sentiment, of course, but I also like the rhythm and the phrasing. Really excellent work!
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I see that the subject finds it normal to be tricked and pushed away and used, so it's hard to understand when someone really cares about you. The subject reminds me of myself.