Reviews for Obsession
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
This has many hidden meanings (I'm guessing), or maybe they're obvious and I'm too daft to see them. Either is quite possible. The repetitiveness of the first stanza ties it together nicely. I know feelings similiar to the one you speak of, even if it is not the same.

Asmodai-Superbia chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
I really like this, I like the repetition and the phrasing, on a whole I'd say, very well done. It's a bit scattered and random but I think it fits perfectly for the poem. Well done. ~ASHe