Reviews for One Hundred
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
This challenge was a good one; this poem is one of my favorites by you. The last line (as most are in your work) was perfect.

Temptation Diver chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
i like it; it's playful and leaves off on a cliffhanger where its kinda like a "fill in the blank"...
Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
i would consider that last line sorta cheating, you didnt exactly finish the sentence. but i take it a bit humorous.
not jackie chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
wow. this is really great. i know that limiting to just 100 words can be a difficult thing, but you've managed to weave a sort of simple complexity (okay, i know that doesn't make much sense, but go with it .) out of it. i love this.