Reviews for Pretty Little Girl
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
eh, this is rly good, too!keep writing!~Liz
msdewey chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
I like the rhythms here - but the wording is a bit confusing in areas. It's seems sort of rushed - I'm not sure if it's the mix of short and long stanzas, but it's a harder beat than most your other work. It's interesting. Keep writing!
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
You seem to be in an "absurd" mood.

I love the way that I feel I know this girl, just after a few lines.