|Reviews for A Daughter to Change the World|
| Freed by Mercy chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Beautiful imagery. I am troubled somewhat by the shade of her skin, as if a certain coler is more beautiful than another. And I don't quite under stand the stars turning (parts of) her body black.
I look forward to the rest of the story.
| Elewyn chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
This is amazing. I love how descriptive it is, and how it actually sounds biblical. I'll be coming back to finish this one later!