Reviews for Love You More
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Great message. Beautiful ending. Keep up the awesome work.
noctilucent chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Wow, i can so totally relate to it. It's like you say you surrender your all to God and yet you struggle between the natural and the spiritual. You start to doubt the visions He gave you when you're down, questioning if it was something you wanted or was it really something from God. I have always felt that but never could write it down. Great poem. But sometimes it's really all about just trusting in Him and letting go.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
that's very sweet, I'm almost in a similar position. personally, I feel like I can either worship with every aspect of my being, and life, or I can't bear to at all. I think it's a balance one has to find, because of this stupid day and age we live.

very good poem. simple and sweet.
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
nicely down, I can relate...sometimes all we can do is just trust in Him and be willing...He is so wonderful! God Bless you. xRachx
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Yeah I can relate to this, I try not to defy him but some times I just can't help it. Lucky for us he's so forgiving. I like this lots.