Reviews for Nocte Yin: How To Be Evil 101
bubublacz chapter 13 . 1/14/2015
Oh goooooddd! I want to read what's next! But I'm concerned for my health! Have got to sleep! MMAAAAANNNN!
bubublacz chapter 12 . 1/14/2015
Oh man, the grandmother! She's evil! Didn't saw that one coming! I love Pride's theory, by the way! Hadn't been excited about a story like this, since I read Four Kingdoms (shameless plugging) which I read 5 years ago.. man! This is so evil that it's so good! I just want to say you truly captured the essence of being a human being. What with hoping that someone would be good, like what Nocte thought of Noir. Too Damn Good!
bubublacz chapter 11 . 1/14/2015
I still can't believe... man oh man... I can't believe that for years that I have been a member of this website, this is my first time reading this.. man!
bubublacz chapter 9 . 1/14/2015
Oh man, you made me cry...
bubublacz chapter 8 . 1/14/2015
Shit... Tears are welling up... Damn!
bubublacz chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
Oooohhhh... interesting :D
bubublacz chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
Oh man... I'm scared for their friendship..
Kaiorven chapter 13 . 10/15/2014
I read these stories a while back, and then decided to reread. Anyway, I really enjoy the family dynamic you placed in the Yin Family, and overall enjoyed the stories. The first two books both have their high notes. However, the conflict in the first Nocte Yin, and the plot progression, I felt, was rather slow and meandering, and the conflict at points rather weak. Also, especially in these two earlier books, you rely too much on telling rather than showing, internal narrative and exposition.

A suggestion (though of course, take it with a grain of salt if need be): Considering the shorter lengths of these two books, I honestly think you could afford to combine the two, and cut all the filler out and end up with a much tighter, more powerful book. Because, again, there are really strong narrative sections (Nocte in the dance contest and Nocte eventually killing Deadwood's grandmother) in amongst some of the weaker bits, and by combining the two I think you'd end up with a much better plot if you interwove the two stories.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
aww, poor nocte! i know it goes against everything she wants, but i kinda really want her to just kick everyones asses!
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 8 . 2/25/2012
damn you! this chapter actually brought tears to my eyes...siyamak TT-TT
Anonymous chapter 13 . 10/24/2011
I must say I really love your writing, sometimes it's so light and playful and sometimes it's so intense... And Nocte is the coolest!

Also, Nocte Yin sounds waaay better then Nocte Yang.
swords dragons and diet coke chapter 13 . 8/13/2010
this story has been especilly moving. it gives me chills to see how much Nocte has grown and how she lost everything important to her. Throughought this story, you have been great at portraying Nocte's feelings and her personality. I look forward to reading the next installment! chapter 12 . 5/26/2010
Hi there. I'm sorry for not being able to review the previous chapters, but I'll say it all here: I love this story! I like how Nocte's from an evil family, but she's not sure if she'll be evil or good. It's great. Second, I really really like how the Yins killed Savvy's grandmother after she betrayed Nocte. They may be an evil family and all, but they still love Nocte. It's really great! And the Hell Dragon was great, as well. I love this series... This series is great. I hope Nocte's family wins the war :)
ponponcake chapter 13 . 3/30/2010
so damn good, i love this series!
Laura Wolf chapter 13 . 2/7/2010
Wow, that was extremely clever with the fist letter of each chapter thing, i cant wait to read the next! I love this plot of yours wth the good and evil thing, 'cause i mean jeez just about every other book is all about goody goos fighing for goodyness, and the Nocte Yin stories are a refreshing break
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