o_O! that chapter was so fantastic it made me all light headed and high. seriously this stuff has to be better than drugs and everything (not that I know but I'm making an educated guess). Seriously that has to be the best chapter I have ever read in my entire life. ENTIRE. Just WOW. I'm obsessed with this story. It is SO SO SO extrodinary. I promise I will buy the book (it better become one), be an extra in the movie then see it at the cinema 5 times and buy it on special edition DVD but its' a fantastic story just wow! I'm still reeling from it. I might read it again.. and again. Utterly AMAZING Best thing I have ever read and i have read A LOT. (Im a reader not a writer and get about 20 emails a day telling me stories I'm reading have been updated and I save this to read to last because I know it's the best. The first Nocte story was a lot more light hearted but wow this one made me all tingly! Just WOW. This has to be my fave story of all time. And fave Character (Nocte is really Awesome) and now the Yin instead of Yang feels okay. It's molded right! I didn't want to stop reading it and tried to make it last as long as possible but i couldn't because it was so good. I'm Ranting but I don't care! summr hols are ended and I've done all my homework but got loads of courswork left.. I deserve a treat and this is deffinitely it. This chappie gave me the biggest headrush.. I'm starting to loose it but I'm going to read it all over again!

Amazing chapter once again. I was having a really hard day (school starts tomorrow) and I was really nervous then I saw that you added a chapter and I got all Nocte, her best friend betrayed her. I always thought something like this would happen but then I figured I was being parodied. It's a shame though, Savvy was fastly becoming one of my favorite characters in the whole story but now I don't really know what to think. I have to give her some credit though she was a good actress unless she's still acting right now and just pretending to be a cold hearted bitch. Hopefully she is, because she seemed to have a good time with Nocte. Hey! was this why Elsu was being so nasty to Savvy at the beginning of the chapter? what I really want to know is how Nocte and Savvy will share a room now that Nocte knows Savvy's true nature. I love how you captured Nocte's feelings in this chapter, not angry or upset- actually I think being as calm as she was is even worst then having a fit. But Nocte's strong and she'll get through it.

...Well, I never liked Savvy anyways.

This chapter was tense. How could Savvy do that? How could you MAKE Savvy do that? Why did you name her Savvy, anyways?

Well, I'm glad to know that no matter what, you can't avoid the Death Glare scene forever. You know you want to write it :D *nudge nudge*

Ah! How could Savvy! I was almost expect something to happen becuase Noctes had evil moment so wny not Savvy.. But it was so mean! But great chapter.. I don't want to wait Please update soon I'm begging this is just so awesome

WOW! I did NOT see that coming! Poor Nocte! What is the general opinion going to be of her now? What will the rest of her family do? How will she remain rooming with Savvy? What will Aman say? What will Nocte have to say to Witley? AH Update soon PLEASE!

poor nocte. things just get worse and worse for her. now it makes sense why savvy was attacked. hm, i wonder who the bloodstone guy was. interesting chapter. great twist.

wow...i didn't see that one coming.

I always wondered why Savvy of all the villans was nice, she seemed the only one, besides Nocre, what a bitch! This chapter made me so sad! Update soon!

Oh, Nocre is really depressed huh, is she like gona go and save her cousin cause that will be cool. And dangerous but hey, she'll prove she good enought! Oh, can't wait for more!

I love your story. Seriously I'm been here for months and this is the first review I have ever wrote. Thats how much I like, no love your story.

Just Super duper! You deserve 10's of reviews for a story this good when its finished.. can I print out both stories so I can have them always? Amazing when i get an email saying a new chapter is here i save it for last cos its the best one!

Well Nocte is certainly progressing. Where's Aman been all this time, surely she's heard about Siyamak? Loved the chapter as usual :)

This chapter was kind of short, with more spaces. It's good to know more information on how Nocte is feeling, though (I mean, my family isn't evil enough to compare. Enough.)I look forward to later chapters. I don't like Occult. I like Dire, but he doesn't show up much.

*sits here hoping hopefully that the other Yins will show up later*

Well, this confirms my thought that newspaper is shit, isn't it?I'm itching for Friday. You should update on Tuesdays, too, since we're all eager little was greedy for tissues, and I've noticed something: Savvy really swings moods, doesn't she? One minute she's crying the whole of Pride down, the next she skipping off to (I wish I could italicize) "LADOMER" (dunn dunn dun).Oh, you'd better hope that Friday comes before I lose my patience and spam you with complaining emails and phone calls. *devillish look*

My internet is finally back alive, and the first thing I did was come here for updates

"If that happened then Nocte would dig out her old Laser of Ultimate Doom and Destruction her father had built for her for her fourth birthday and bust a cap in her ass."

...I seriously loved that. I laughed so hard that my speakers (remember my speakers?)fell off and landed behind my laughter stopped at the end. That sucked. Family is not supposed to put war first, evil or not! That was just cruel of the Yins. I look forward to later chapters (I know you're done :D)