Reviews for Snow Angels
Yummytea chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
An excellent display of what it truly means to prove someone wrong. Fantastic! :D
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Quite abstract, I like it! :)
winged chronos chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I personally loved your use of italics. It really added a descriptive kick to the story, especially the magnets. They seem to reflect his inner thoughts ("it's going to break before long..."). I also liked the repetition of the disappointment phrase and the negation at the end. Gives a story a definitive final. Good job!

On Eagle's Wings chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Interesting story; I like the repetition then the negation of it at the end. Well-written.