Reviews for Dreams
fallin4ualwayz chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
so so true! its awesome! thnx
lordelfy chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
You should really make this in to a song. Just write a catchy chorus and you would be on you way to fame and fortune. That is if you can sing and get really good guitars and drums. Heehee rock band! YESS!
Romance'Is'Dead chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
very nice i like this one
CandidDelusions chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
I was just thinking about this and your poem is the almost the exact conversation I was having with myself this morning. About wanting to be someone and be there for my family...The last two were especially good because it makes me think that you've got something going on now that's keeping you from living your dream and you just want it to end so your life can begin. Thanx 4 reviewing my poem a while back.
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
This is cuute in an innocent kind of way. Nice poem.

( Thanks for your review! )
Jackaroe chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
this poem is touching. i'm a big dreamer myself and pursuing dreams as opposed to just squaring with reality has become a conflict in my life. and the message you got through something i'm sure many people think about. plus, the imagery you created is memorable.

good job and keep writing.