Reviews for Love of My Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay, i think i'm going to stop reading here. i mean seriosuly, this girl is clueless. the guy could be mauling her and she wouldn't even know. i mean, that sounds really mean but where's the depth in this story? everyone seems to be fluffing around just strolling through there own little worlds, not really caring about anything else. and what's with the australian guy? seriously it's as if you just whacked him in there for the sake of it. why doesn't Cade do anything about Chase? he just yells at her and then pisses off into his merry own little world. where's the complications or anything really? |
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![]() ![]() Was just curious if you were ever going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really good, and I liked it, but in the chapter you mixed up Cade and Chase's names! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My cousin was going to go in to the air force. Then he found out he was colour blind so he couldn't do it. He was pretty devo. Anyway ... Oh! She told her parents about Chase. I loved her fathers reaction when she said Cade was dating her best friend. Haha. I'm totally like Rhapsody when it comes to horses - clueless. Well, I'm actually scared of them but that's not something I openly express. Except for now. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Yes I was surprised with Chase's choice i started having a minor case of hyperventilation. LOL I'm so happy you updated i love this story and Rhapsody and chase are so adorable. Craig cracks me up and i can't wait for the next chapter Please update soon :] Amazing job -Yellers* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know its long, but Nobiz Like Shobiz was the horse i had picked to win the Kentucky Derby in 2007. Any way, i like the little part about going Horse back riding, update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I for some reason don't think the dinner is going to go so well... But maybe it will and my pessimisticness is just rising to the surface. Update soon so I can know! |
![]() ![]() I really like this story so far so please update soon! Sorry I don't really have anything else to say about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just read your whole story...i love it...cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() No worries we definitely share the horrible updating curse :] Anyways great chapter loved chase's heartfelt speech They're just so adorable can't wait to read more :] -yellers |
![]() ![]() ![]() You finally updated! I've been waiting so long, but it was worth it. Good job, keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yepp! Changed it again! Only coz pop-yur-fcukn-collar is probably the most fun game anyone came play during a double of science. It's pretty lame coz me and the two people on my table made it up. Lol. I can't remmeber what my penname was before this. : ... i totally forgot. I literally started squealing when I saw you updated this. I got back from a horrible exam which I've probably failed, I get the rest of the day off, and one of my favourties had been updated! I was so glad. Lol. I got so excited that my kitten ran under the bed in fright. Another great chapter! Chase is sweet. I want a boyfriend like him. My ex wasn't much of a charmer. He called me beautiful once then added when I complained I had to wear a school uniform, you look hot in it. I was like, gee thanks mate. I think Chase is everyone's dream guy. Update soon! I must end my long review here, I have to somehow stop my fat dog from getting stuck under the desk. Ta ta! P.S. This story rocks and sorry for the review filled wiht random stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O *cliffhanger* dun...dun...DUN. What will Denny do? How will Rhapsody feel? What will the other twenty crushees say when they hear the same news? *says all of this in Mr. MoviePhone voice* :) I was so excited to see that you'd updated! I love following this story. And, it struck me as odd that another story that I'm reading on fictionpress is much like this one! Not the same, but almost. The girl falls in love with the guy. The girl's surrounded by guy-friends who are uber protective of her. The guy, who's a jock, gets slammed at school and by her friends. :) They're both pretty similar. :) Anywhoo-this chapter was great! I can't think of anything that I can *lovingly* criticize about it, so "king to you, my friend". (King to you is something from Count of Monte Cristo.) Can't wait to see what you've got planned for us faithful readers next! Always, Irony |