Reviews for A F T E R T H O U G H T
Crithach chapter 7 . 4/26/2013
Agh! Noooo, this wasn't complete! D: ...I really should be more careful and not even read unfinished stories lest I might fall for them.. It's been such a long time you've updated anything I'm taking that you won't. Well, it was a nice ride while it lasted. Maybe not the most original story, but pretty good and all the emotion was there. I'm a bit disappointed I won't be able to finish it now. ): I'll just...follow this just to be sure, though. Have a nice day.
Ciara Darren chapter 7 . 4/13/2013
Just read all of this at one go. Just found it. Please finish! P.S. I like the cat.
Arkov chapter 7 . 1/11/2009
Such a nice story :D I really hope you can update soon.. I like the way you're writing it.. No need for improvement there ;)
Nameless Rose chapter 7 . 12/22/2008
I've been meaning to read one of your stories for awhile and I love this! Normally, I have so much trouble keeping Japanese names straight, but I can tell them all apart, especially Kaoru (whom I love.) Please update soon. :3
qq chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
I love Kaoru and Takashi! Please update soon. I can't believe you left us with this cliffhanger. :)
My World Of Indulgence chapter 7 . 12/1/2008
i love this so much. i think both men have wonderful interaction with each other and karou sounds so sexy! awesome job. KEEP GOING PLEASE! i need to know what happens! :) ttyl
livworld chapter 7 . 7/4/2008
OMG! This is so good! Update please. I can't wait to see what happens.
SiD EliA chapter 7 . 5/2/2008
YEAR LONG WAIT! What? Don't you dare do that to me. I want more really badly. Please. (I'm on my knees) Please. (I'm getting my pants dirty) Please.
SiD EliA chapter 5 . 5/2/2008
Ouch, I'm feeling really sad for Takashi, That cold shoulder was icy.
SiD EliA chapter 3 . 5/1/2008
HOLY EFFING A I HAVE TO GO BELL RUNG BUT I'M IN LOVE
navi chapter 7 . 2/24/2008
woohoo! another chapter! I almost died when I saw the notification in my inbox. Looking forward to the next one!
sakiikumi chapter 7 . 2/22/2008
right. Now I have read it all. I hope Kaoru-kun slaps Takashi-san! I loved the lyrics and your discription. waiting for the next chapter
sakiikumi chapter 2 . 2/22/2008
I was going to wait until after I read the rest of the chapters to review but... BY GOD TAKASHI-SAN IS SUCH A BASTARD! Okay, on with the rest of the story...
Christy Leigh Stewart chapter 7 . 2/10/2008
Wonderful! This is the first thing I've read from the managa section Your story and characters are so good, you did a wonderful job. Are you Japanese?
Chibineko-chan chapter 7 . 2/6/2008
Wo...I just read this on a whim, and my word, I am impressed! The change the boys went through is astonishing, and your writing is so empathic and real. I was gripped until the end of your latest chapter. You've made the boys so believeable...I love the idea of turning timid Kaoru into a VK god and toning down Takashi's extravagance...it made me a little sad when I read what he could have been at the start of Shattered. I love the girls, too - you write them so energetically!

All your charries are so believable and I can picture them so easily in my head...mind if I try a fanart of them when I next get free time?

Keep it up, I love this! D
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