Reviews for A F T E R T H O U G H T |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Agh! Noooo, this wasn't complete! D: ...I really should be more careful and not even read unfinished stories lest I might fall for them.. It's been such a long time you've updated anything I'm taking that you won't. Well, it was a nice ride while it lasted. Maybe not the most original story, but pretty good and all the emotion was there. I'm a bit disappointed I won't be able to finish it now. ): I'll just...follow this just to be sure, though. Have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read all of this at one go. Just found it. Please finish! P.S. I like the cat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a nice story :D I really hope you can update soon.. I like the way you're writing it.. No need for improvement there ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been meaning to read one of your stories for awhile and I love this! Normally, I have so much trouble keeping Japanese names straight, but I can tell them all apart, especially Kaoru (whom I love.) Please update soon. :3 |
![]() ![]() I love Kaoru and Takashi! Please update soon. I can't believe you left us with this cliffhanger. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this so much. i think both men have wonderful interaction with each other and karou sounds so sexy! awesome job. KEEP GOING PLEASE! i need to know what happens! :) ttyl |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! This is so good! Update please. I can't wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAR LONG WAIT! What? Don't you dare do that to me. I want more really badly. Please. (I'm on my knees) Please. (I'm getting my pants dirty) Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch, I'm feeling really sad for Takashi, That cold shoulder was icy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY EFFING A I HAVE TO GO BELL RUNG BUT I'M IN LOVE |
![]() ![]() woohoo! another chapter! I almost died when I saw the notification in my inbox. Looking forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() right. Now I have read it all. I hope Kaoru-kun slaps Takashi-san! I loved the lyrics and your discription. waiting for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was going to wait until after I read the rest of the chapters to review but... BY GOD TAKASHI-SAN IS SUCH A BASTARD! Okay, on with the rest of the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! This is the first thing I've read from the managa section Your story and characters are so good, you did a wonderful job. Are you Japanese? |
![]() ![]() Wo...I just read this on a whim, and my word, I am impressed! The change the boys went through is astonishing, and your writing is so empathic and real. I was gripped until the end of your latest chapter. You've made the boys so believeable...I love the idea of turning timid Kaoru into a VK god and toning down Takashi's extravagance...it made me a little sad when I read what he could have been at the start of Shattered. I love the girls, too - you write them so energetically! All your charries are so believable and I can picture them so easily in my head...mind if I try a fanart of them when I next get free time? Keep it up, I love this! D |