Great story, hope you start updating more often! xD

This is my first time reading this story and I must say that I am enjoying it so far. I can see why it has so many wonderful reviews. It's also nice to meet another author who likes to write shounen-ai.

You think eleven pages are long? Lol, my usual number of pages in MS Word average on 15-20 for most of my stories.

I'll definitely be back to give you another review.

If you wish, feel free to check out some of my works. You may like them.

aw, it's cute.

I like it! it's nice- well-spaced out, if you know what i mean. Nothing happens too quickly; that's a big pet peeve of mine.

*loves it*

Aw, poor Takashi-san! One mistake in the past and he's paying for it pretty hardcore in the future.

Hee, I like Aiko and her group! Poor very certainly not homosexual Takashi; drafted into their group of doom! Where can I sign up for the group of doom? Life sounds so much better out there *sigh*

Hmm, I noticed the odd spelling mistake, but I forgot to write them down right away and now have no clue where they are. Ah heh, sorry *ish guilty*

Oo, and your very first paragraph, the intro to the story in the prologue, I just found it a wee bit hard to comprehend. It's not like there's anything wrong with it, just that you skip from sort of present terms to memory in-the-past phrases like "back then" and "at that moment". It just left me a little confused while reading it, trying to decide whether it was a memory or a present action. I obviously got it later, but I dunno, it was the only thing I could find to suggest a correction, hee.

Great job! I noticed your last update was last year, are you still going to continue this? You've really set it all up well. I love the situations your main characters are in and how their lives are so different from past to present. I hope you decide to update soon!

aw! its so sweet!

i love it so much.

if i had money, i wood totally pay you to continue!

but i dont . . . .

so cood u possibly just continue anyway? please please please please!

ill give u an online hug and cookie?

More, please?

I love how Takashi lives alone with just a cat..vaugely humorous, still pretty sad though. Excellent so far, i'm enjoying this greatly. And despite the risk of sounding like a fan girl...i LOVE Kaoru!

Great chapter! plz update soon!

great chappie...and i'm hungry now...

Nii! This is wonderful! Ah, you must update when you have a chance!...please? Haha, I really look forward to the next update.

I think I love you a little.

Please continue this! I love your characters...they are very real. They have a history and a personality all their own, and that makes them memorable. You have to keep going!

Nu! There's no more! I want more! Please update soon! Kaoru and Jack seem to be in a relationship, maybe? I hope so, cuz then there will be so much more drama. I would actually root for Jack in that situation b/c Takashi seems like a prick to me. He doesn't really deserve Kaoru. So, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I love it so far! Update soon

Really good story so far. I like it alot. Kaoru needs to learn how to lighten up a soon.

Wonderful story so far! I can't believe you only have three (four counting mine) reviews! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!