I like it, I really did. It has a bit of a cynical view on life, but it's realistic, and those are two things I rather value. It makes it sound cold but I think it's better than colours and rainbows. Most would label it pessimistic but to hell with it, me likes. I would have loved to read more though -poke- it was a shorty, Luna-chan.

Best Wishes from AG

Excellent - you've managed to capture my thoughts and concerns in writing, and good writing at that. Great use of language. Well done.