Reviews for Garden
SpawnMeister666 chapter 7 . 10/2/2006
This is a pretty decent tale, well paced and well written for the most part. The ending was a bit off though, left me wanting to know what else is going on.

There are bits of the tale that don't really scan, like the whole point of the garden is not sufficiently explained to make any real sense.

For the most part though it does enough to keep the attention.

forty-two dreams chapter 7 . 7/5/2006
That's pretty good, if a little heavy-handed. A different viewpoint.
Yellow Memory chapter 7 . 7/4/2006
Wow. This was a really interesting story, and an impressive allegory. Many props. :)