Reviews for Howl
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
Update soon, please. I love this story.
fire-breathing-kitten chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Yay, werewolves? I like werewolves, but this one doesn't seem to be very likeable.

Interesting plot. This is something a little different exactly does she plan on hunting Zack down?
Elizabeth Watkins chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
I liked the concept of the story so far, but it was difficult to follow at some points.

You've got a LOT of fragments in there, and some spots that don't make sense to me at all. For example: "Horrified ran down her cheeks unchecked."

Also, you can combine many of your sentences to create a better flow. You've got the details to give the scenes the ability to play in a movie-like way in my head, but the constant ending and beginnings of sentences interrupts it. Also, why so many paragraphs? A paragraph should be at least four sentences, not every other line.

You've got the makings of a good story here, if you could just pull it all together. I'm going to keep watching. Hope you'll keep this in mind in future chapters ;P
Ningyou Hime chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
_ Yo, Manga! Vooie here!

Awesome story, I love it s'far. And it's well written, too. *nodnod*