Reviews for The Death Gypsy |
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![]() ![]() I love it and i know you're trying to make Ragnarok have an accent, but sometimes i don't know what he said. So maybe change his dialogue to something more understandable |
![]() ![]() A girl with white hair and heterochromia!? Sounds like a massive Mary-Sue to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue on. I really love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. Can't believe it only got this much review :/ Can't wait for the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to reading this story. Hoping you get a chance to finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this. Please update fAst! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just recently found this story and am completely addicted ) This may be a stupid question, but Lillius is still pregnant, right? She didn't lose the baby during the raid? Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the thing that amazes me is that you actually managed to keep writing this for such a long time and that you still feel compelled to finish it. honestly, i've written so many stories (not published online, but still) and i'm trapped in a curse of hitting the 3 month mark, deciding i can't stand what i've written and ditching forever ;) i absolutely love this story though, and it would be awesome to see it rewritten now that you're older and your writing has matured. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best of luck with the revision! I know exactly how you feel. I have a number of projects that I started many years ago and am overwhelmed by my naivete. If you'd like some help with correcting the historical aspects, I'd be glad to help. I'm an historian by profession. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Crap! I wasn't expecting to see an update for this (even an AN). Good luck with the revision. I can't wait to read the new and improved version. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that crap is stupid. your story is awesome, sure having a beta wouldn't hurt...but the mistakes are minimal and easily forgiven _ a few typos aren't the end of the word, and don't ruin such a wonderful story. I hope you update soon...its been a while and I am anxious to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() I so cannot wait until you update, I think about this story all of the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting so far, but its not my favorite format. Anyways, reading on |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I happened upon this story today, and read every chapter, and now I'm sad.. because I have to wait for an update. All I can say is wonderful work, and please update soon. |