Simply wonderful. Love it. I'm feeling the same.

And, I believe your Spanish is correct. :D

Keep it up!

ok, i saw the spanish and had to review hehe. yup, your meaning is right. if you care, "esta" needs an accent on the a, and "cuando" needs the accent on the a instead...

I am really so glad I found your writing...

i love the detail in this, it's so gorgeous. i think it's one of your best poems. and the ending is great... even tho i dont know spanish, the meaning is still gorgeous.

it is beautiful

simple.

This was such a pretty poem, it was very nicely written! Great imagery as well.