Reviews for Torn Hearts
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
The imagery is great, but I'm sorry, but I don't see it how it goes with torn hearts. I'm in a daze-like phase now.

Keep writing.
classic violet chapter 2 . 7/11/2006
... and he/she just left. wonderful. sad, but beautiful.
classic violet chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Reminds me of Japan. Of which I've never been. Fantastic job, it's so very vivid.
a lonely september chapter 2 . 7/5/2006
being left behind. with only three lines, you've captured it well.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
wow... great detail in this poem... like the last line... and the beginning, just such a sway-like, sweet feel to it.
darknessblooms chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
I love the imagery...almost magical. I like the fourth line, I don't know why...I feel like it's the saddest line, carrying the most emotion, though hidden. Well done.
Aquafied chapter 2 . 6/25/2006
existing but not for reasoni am not sure what to make of this.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
beautifulbut it seems so