|Reviews for Wolves|
| honey haiku chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
The last line, though. I could write paragraphs explaining and contemplating, but you've done it all here. Simply beautiful.
| Dani P chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Love this poem..makes me think of a person who is at peace, but knows that there is danger yet to come. great job.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
"Watching the birds flee from fox
Knowing wolves have yet to knock"
Oh wow, I love that! Lovely poem.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
this was really interesting. i liked the last line. left you thinking...
| Rannulfr chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
This poem feels like the calm before the storm, before a soldier goes into a battle not knowing whether he will live or he will die, it is very well written.
| darknessblooms chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
I knew you sounded familiar! Ode to Stalker Boy...hahaha. Life always manages to prove how small the world (in this case, FP) can be.
I like the slant rhyme in the last two lines. The imagery is interesting as well.
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Awesome last line!
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
reminds me of forests before the fire hits
it makes me long for the mountains