Reviews for The Matchmaker is Down
annon chapter 8 . 5/12/2012
What kind of ending is this? And you haven't posted for 3 years already? Please update soon! I can't believe I discovered this story so late!

I love this plot you've got going and I really anticipate how Chris will come to realise that she's the one for him! Nick really does sound like someone she needs to be with to mature AND I foresee twists and turns ahead! Seeing that this is a matchmaker story, will you include more of the side stories of her matching couples up to? I love seeing how couples get together!

Please update soon!
Elyssa Morales chapter 8 . 2/12/2009
Wow, Nick can be pretty deep, and Chris really needs to grow up. Regardless, I really like this story. Keep updating!
pockets are my friends chapter 8 . 2/10/2009
Cute story, kind of sad, though.
secretslinger chapter 8 . 2/7/2009
I really enjoyed this chapter and i can't wait to read what happens next to chris...i also hope that nick will get her to see that she does have a love life and that it could be a god thing.
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
This is a really great story so far. I like it and Chris's personality is hilarious. What he said was kinda mean though. You sort of left off with suspense soo update soon plz )!

-kay gee
Stahlut chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
I love this story, please update soon.
Julia Nathan chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
NO! You can't end it there! I need more like NOW! OMG! How can she be so so so STUPID? UGH! Why ugh god I nedd more now! PLZ! :(
Izzey chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
wow. he was right, but it was also harsh. but then again, reality IS harsh. but anyways, another marvelous chapter. please update again asap!
sofiya05 chapter 8 . 2/6/2009

I like! I like! Lol, thought I'd try caveman speak there. So Chris has finally met her match I see. I do think Nick was a bit harsh though, I know he was a bit pissed but she's only trying to help.

Anyways, Update soon!

Sofi :)
claireponcherrii chapter 5 . 2/6/2009
pandorka42 chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
Dum dum dum...
I'm the Evil Twin chapter 8 . 2/6/2009
Aw...that was sexy. please don't abandon it in the corner though
FamousOneLiners chapter 7 . 11/18/2008
i am so so so happy i found this story again, this chapter was great!
Izzey chapter 7 . 11/17/2008
she is so clueless. lol. she can't see what's right in front of her. i guess she will in time. lol. awesome story so far. please update again soon
pandorka42 chapter 6 . 7/24/2008
Hahahahaha! Oh, man! I love this story you've got going here!

Very unique plot line (at least, I've never heard it before), and Chris' personality really pulled me in. Nick seems like the perfect guy for Little Chrissy-in-denial. Lol.

One thing though, sometimes when the characters should probably be talking in a semi-formal way, you've put them into full out long grammar. Is it just the characters way of talking? Because from their actions, it doesn't seem like it would be...

For example!

[“I am sorry that tonight did not work out. I will see you later.”] I think it would sound better if Nick said it like, "I'm sorry that tonight didn't work out. I'll see you later." It seems to fit his more laid back style with a less formal tone.

Anyway! Great story, and I hope you update again soon! :)
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